I'm so glad this is being featured because I would have never found it otherwise.
It's so lively and full of character, with a simple plot that serves the comedy very well. You can tell everyone involved had fun making this.
I have no idea why this is rated so low and it's such a shame.

It's pretty fun once you get comfortable and start memorizing recipes! Getting used to the controls take a bit but honestly, I'm wondering why this guy drinks so much
I put everything on one counter to save time. :3

Great job all around!

It's a solid enough demo.
There's a problem where if you put more than one dirty dish in the sink, the game will "forget" the previous one and you can't clean it, thus losing a dish for the day.

Nitpicks:
if you take meat off, the stove, you lose your progress on the bar and have to wait the entire duration again. This didn't seem to be that case with other ingredients though.
You can move away while chopping and temporarily freeze the bar, interacting again continues the task.
Getting rid of furniture has no kind of sale/refund so I got rid of a countertop lost valuable space :')

I suggest adding faster walking/turning to the upgrades, I found moving to be more frustrating than chopping/cleaning quickly.
Also there's no indication what I'm facing or close enough to interact with, some kind of highlighting/arrow would be nice. Maybe a way to tell what ingredients are in a burger so far.
The lack of music during gameplay is kind of jarring.

I accidently gave a customer two patties in his burg and he refused to eat it. Picky guy

I mean, it's a fine enough way to pass time. Gems give bonus points if you shoot them, hitting targets in rapid succession adds a point multiplier. The ball changes speed and direction about every 3 seconds so you have to be careful.

I'm not sure how to suggest improvement; the game is simple and works because it is simple. Only wish the text would disappear or become transparent when you start firing.

Thank you for teaching us about bread

Your style is cute and the paneling is easy to follow. You use space well :)

I would say the second, since it's more visually clear even when smaller (it would work as a thumbnail on NGs, apps, etc.) Great job with these!

I prefer either the first or the second.
If you made the title stand out more on the first picture (like add a back color, change the color of the 2) it would stand out more. Same for the second picture, I would make the 2 white.